Hi Tim - I think the general arrangement lookls very good. My main comment relates to the writing - it's great to have plenty of explanatory text, but I would try to make sure there is some sort of hierarchy, or way of focusing on the most pertinent statements. You could "quote" important sentences in larger fonts for instance - think of how a newspaper works from headline to detailed bylines. does this help? Andrew
grey lines are crop marks! couldn't find away to hide them!
oh these are random two page spreads btw!
ReplyDeleteHi Tim - I think the general arrangement lookls very good. My main comment relates to the writing - it's great to have plenty of explanatory text, but I would try to make sure there is some sort of hierarchy, or way of focusing on the most pertinent statements. You could "quote" important sentences in larger fonts for instance - think of how a newspaper works from headline to detailed bylines.
ReplyDeletedoes this help?
Andrew