looks great. i like how you did the exterior, really gives it context. i was just wondering, from the last time i heard u talk about it, u mentioned it was a community centre, not just for reading but for things such as conference room and internet etc. from this picture, it really focuses on the community aspect. like i can see it brings the community together. but the activities that u carry out arent that clear. maybe if u have a few smaller images that goes with this showing a person reading, using the computer, having a meeting etc. just an idea =) ~sash
Hey Brady, that image looks really good, gives a great idea of occupation of your building, the views to outside work well. whats going on with the roof though?
i agree with sasha - it looks good but a few more silhouettes showing people engaged in activity so you really get a sense of exactly how he building is used, and it would make it look more atmospheric. virginia
Michael, The black ceiling is quite heavy - particularly with using black for you people. You need to consider how the floor and ceiling plane work - at the moment they are flat undifferentiated surfaces. Andrew
looks great. i like how you did the exterior, really gives it context. i was just wondering, from the last time i heard u talk about it, u mentioned it was a community centre, not just for reading but for things such as conference room and internet etc. from this picture, it really focuses on the community aspect. like i can see it brings the community together. but the activities that u carry out arent that clear. maybe if u have a few smaller images that goes with this showing a person reading, using the computer, having a meeting etc. just an idea =)
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Hey Brady, that image looks really good, gives a great idea of occupation of your building, the views to outside work well. whats going on with the roof though?
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i agree with sasha - it looks good but a few more silhouettes showing people engaged in activity so you really get a sense of exactly how he building is used, and it would make it look more atmospheric.
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Michael,
ReplyDeleteThe black ceiling is quite heavy - particularly with using black for you people. You need to consider how the floor and ceiling plane work - at the moment they are flat undifferentiated surfaces.
Andrew