Hi Evie, I don't have too many comments for you on your portfolio - it is looking excellent. Graphically it is very engaging and elegant. I'm finding it difficult to read the text at this resolution, so this comment is made without the benefit of seeing the content of the words - you should make sure that if there are ideas embedded in the diagrams that need explanation that you provide a little additional text to do this. It could be at the end or the beginning of a section as a summary or intro. The other thing you might do is provide some introductory explanation of what you have been asked to do. Remember that, the portfolio should be able to be picked up by anyone and be comprehensible as a stand alone document. good stuff! A
Hi Evie,
ReplyDeleteI don't have too many comments for you on your portfolio - it is looking excellent. Graphically it is very engaging and elegant. I'm finding it difficult to read the text at this resolution, so this comment is made without the benefit of seeing the content of the words - you should make sure that if there are ideas embedded in the diagrams that need explanation that you provide a little additional text to do this. It could be at the end or the beginning of a section as a summary or intro. The other thing you might do is provide some introductory explanation of what you have been asked to do. Remember that, the portfolio should be able to be picked up by anyone and be comprehensible as a stand alone document.
good stuff!
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