I'm just wanting some feedback on my master plan. Is it clear where the focus is? Is it easy to read and distinguish between different paths? Are the trees any better?
Amy, this is a lot easier to read, the trees are more realistic, i cuple of things your could think about
-making the tree transparent to you can read the car parks underneath
-instead of using haching use a colour for the footpaths as they bend into the line work or is this an important part of your design, as maybe they can just be lines without hatching
-what is the main focus for your design? (i haven't seen your work for a while) as here it is saying the trees, water and your buidling are as they are the only this in colour, is this what you want it to convey?
The drawing is definitely improving Amy - a design issue - you might want to consider varying the texture or adding more detail to the landscape component. Perhaps the trees are the major element and there is a second smaller or narrower (pedestrian scale) planting. I'm only saying this because the design appears as a "big idea" but on that is not yet worked into in more detail or layering. Evie's point on transparency is useful in this regard A
yeah the trees look heaps heaps better than the circle ones u had last =D
ReplyDeletejust one thing, whats that blank huge circle on the top right?
~sash
Amy, this is a lot easier to read, the trees are more realistic, i cuple of things your could think about
ReplyDelete-making the tree transparent to you can read the car parks underneath
-instead of using haching use a colour for the footpaths as they bend into the line work or is this an important part of your design, as maybe they can just be lines without hatching
-what is the main focus for your design? (i haven't seen your work for a while) as here it is saying the trees, water and your buidling are as they are the only this in colour, is this what you want it to convey?
hope that helps, evie
The drawing is definitely improving Amy - a design issue - you might want to consider varying the texture or adding more detail to the landscape component. Perhaps the trees are the major element and there is a second smaller or narrower (pedestrian scale) planting. I'm only saying this because the design appears as a "big idea" but on that is not yet worked into in more detail or layering. Evie's point on transparency is useful in this regard
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