maybe use either black or white people as its a little confusing as some blend into the back ground. The context is good, the train helps a lot in imagining it all.evie
Thanks Evie :)
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maybe use either black or white people as its a little confusing as some blend into the back ground. The context is good, the train helps a lot in imagining it all.
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Thanks Evie :)
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