Monday, April 19, 2010


Hey guys, Other than the black people (which I will change) i still feel like this render is missing something. It is just a view of the east side of the platform, the side where i have planned the youth centre development. thanks! James

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  1. The foreground and background is missing James - you have plenty happening for the building itself in the midground, but there is no sense of context - you need to "create" this in photoshop or in some other way (montage?) to make the image work
    A

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  2. James, I think you should put in a train pulling up to the platform if you can-it kinda looks like you could get a train on that angle. I know you're not doing context but i'd still put in trees and other things in the distance. Its kind of reading like a station in the middle of a field to me (even though you have the gravel/concrete)

    Amy

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