(hey it's Michael by the way) The different lineweights don't show up in this uploaded image and it's a bit pixelated, but apart from that. Do i need to show more context, because there isn't really any at Caz Springs..
trees maybe? Um its kinda of hard to read as a section at the moment, a couple of things, the beamy things that hold up the roof look like they have over corssing intersecting lines, so it is hard to read what is on top of what. Maybe try to join the roof and walls and floor in the left building to make it esier to read.
What is the super black stuff on the right, its a little confusing, im guessing a line weight conversion issue but at the moment its the first thing you look at due to the density of the lines, if it isnt the most inportant thing in the design, even delete a few of them
This is one of my sections. Thoughts?
(hey it's Michael by the way)
ReplyDeleteThe different lineweights don't show up in this uploaded image and it's a bit pixelated, but apart from that. Do i need to show more context, because there isn't really any at Caz Springs..
trees maybe? Um its kinda of hard to read as a section at the moment, a couple of things, the beamy things that hold up the roof look like they have over corssing intersecting lines, so it is hard to read what is on top of what. Maybe try to join the roof and walls and floor in the left building to make it esier to read.
ReplyDeleteWhat is the super black stuff on the right, its a little confusing, im guessing a line weight conversion issue but at the moment its the first thing you look at due to the density of the lines, if it isnt the most inportant thing in the design, even delete a few of them
the roof is sexy haha! evie