why thank you evelyn! it's beautiful. i dont feel 90% blind when looking at it anymore!;) just one thing are you leaving those trees as blobs? otherwise it looks good to me. (when i do a plan ill put it up..)
much better without blurry lines, i will look at it this time. and when i had my ruler out i couldnt check your line weights properly because of the blur (haha yes i am kidding).
ok plan layout looks pretty good to me, the only thing i would say is look at the "dead" spaces created, like what is happening there. ie, between 7 and 3. and also that corner to the right of 5. maybe you could put blobs in these spaces?!
hi loz - the plan is looking good - a few things to think about - glazing vs. solid walls - you need to differentiate this, particularly with your internal courtyard spaces. You might consider showing differences in floor / ground plane finishes, particularly with the interior to exterior conditions. andrew
why thank you evelyn! it's beautiful. i dont feel 90% blind when looking at it anymore!;)
ReplyDeletejust one thing are you leaving those trees as blobs? otherwise it looks good to me.
(when i do a plan ill put it up..)
much better without blurry lines, i will look at it this time. and when i had my ruler out i couldnt check your line weights properly because of the blur (haha yes i am kidding).
ReplyDeleteok plan layout looks pretty good to me, the only thing i would say is look at the "dead" spaces created, like what is happening there. ie, between 7 and 3. and also that corner to the right of 5.
maybe you could put blobs in these spaces?!
sorry that was sarah in case you were wondering who the mystery commenter was
ReplyDeletehi loz - the plan is looking good - a few things to think about - glazing vs. solid walls - you need to differentiate this, particularly with your internal courtyard spaces. You might consider showing differences in floor / ground plane finishes, particularly with the interior to exterior conditions.
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*this is evies work, not mine! thought i would gladly claim it
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