hey sarah, this gives me a good feel of the project. is the blue shade intentionally representing something? and are all the thicknesses of materials correct? some parts seem a bit thin.
Agree with dan on the lineweights. They seem pretty diagramatic for technical drawings. you should chuck a bit of the internal program behind the blue to beef it up a bit. sexy trains though. alex
Again lines weights will make this drawing alot stronger, also include thickness in the floor at currently the right part has no floor thickness for the bottom level, in the section cut join all roof, floor and walls as it makes it easier to read what is being cut through.
Do you have any other drawings so we can try to understand how the building works, as a little confused! Loooking good
Sarah - this is a decent start, but I would expect more detail - this is why one or two of your viewers are "confused" - doors and window fenestration would be a good place to start. Also windows have a limit in size before they need to be panelised - say 3x6m Andrew
hey sarah, this gives me a good feel of the project. is the blue shade intentionally representing something? and are all the thicknesses of materials correct? some parts seem a bit thin.
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Agree with dan on the lineweights. They seem pretty diagramatic for technical drawings. you should chuck a bit of the internal program behind the blue to beef it up a bit.
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Again lines weights will make this drawing alot stronger, also include thickness in the floor at currently the right part has no floor thickness for the bottom level, in the section cut join all roof, floor and walls as it makes it easier to read what is being cut through.
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Sarah - this is a decent start, but I would expect more detail - this is why one or two of your viewers are "confused" - doors and window fenestration would be a good place to start. Also windows have a limit in size before they need to be panelised - say 3x6m
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