First slide is a research page justifying my decisions for the ten specific sister sites throughout the world,
The left of this slide shows where the ten specific sites sit throughout the community, and the right side is a 1:2000 masterplan, showing circulation, parking, etc.
Obviously the content will make more sense when i am up speaking about these slides, just would like feedback on how they read, ie - line weights, colour, positioning etc. And keep in mind when printed these slides are A5 sheets, so the text will actually be quite small
Thanks guys
Dan
and i dont know why but you cant open the pages and see them at full size..pretty annoying. hopefully you get the point of them anyway
ReplyDeletedan
dan - the conceptual communication is great - like the idea!! my main comment is about the fonts - keep them VERY simple - avoid using more than about 3 sizes - keep them small - no italics or underlining - it is important that the text does not draw your eye away from the drawing
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Andrew