evie i think it reads well and is looking good, i dont know your project really well, but as far as i remember its a pretty challenging form. all the dotted projected lines in the middle confuse me a bit, but they obviously are describing something happening above or below. i think in combination with the sections it will bring it together. looking really good.
evie i think it reads well and is looking good, i dont know your project really well, but as far as i remember its a pretty challenging form. all the dotted projected lines in the middle confuse me a bit, but they obviously are describing something happening above or below. i think in combination with the sections it will bring it together. looking really good.
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looking good evie. All i could suggest would be to give the dotted lines different weights to give them a bit of depth.
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