suggestions for how the weird rhino object 10x10x10 should be shown in the appendix?

Axo Diagram

hey peeps, here is an exploded axonometric diagram that ive done. it is more or less a hybrid parti/axo of my project.

it's supposed to show the underlying concepts behind my building, which is mainly the bike path running through the middle of the island platform and the man-made tree-like beams which encompass the station. so basically, the main strucutural features of the station.

anywho, feedback would be great :) - dmitry

any thought??

When we have presentation tomorrow exactly??

With Train

Does this read better?

MB

jpegs?

hey andrew, the line weights on my pdfs look like shit! i tried making the line weights thinner and played around with different page sizes but it has no difference.   is it ok if i jpeg them instead for the crit?

Tim

Hi all, here is a render of my cafe/nursery. would appreciate any feedback :)